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Songs throughout the past

Post by redserpent on Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:44 pm

Just a few couple songs I've written over the years. I've got a lot, but I'll only post a few for now. Now if only I could sing...

Fallen Tears
Sitting alone here in my bed,
Thinkin' about the things you've said,
Wondering if your honesty
Can be trusted.
Why did it take such a long time
For all of the lies to unwind?
Running the scenarios
All day in my mind,
Is it a crime
Of mine?

And now we're both alone
Together,
Feeling dark and cold
Forever,
Wishing that our past
Will come to pass
Just one more time.
And now we're face-to-face
Once again,
Lost without a trace
Of a friend,
Wond'ring if our fight
Will shed some light
On fallen tears.

Such a long, painful time has passed,
I wonder how long it will last,
Debating if it went slow or
If it went fast.
I don't care how long it will take,
All I want is to see your face,
I'll pack all of my things
And leave without a trace,
And I'll escape
This place,

So we can be alone
Together,
Feeling dark and cold
Forever,
Wishing that our past
Will come to pass
Just one more time.
And now we're face-to-face
Once again,
Lost without a trace
Of a friend,
Wond'ring if our fight
Will shed some light
On fallen tears.

On fallen tears...
(whispered)These tears fall for you,
And only you.

And now we're both alone
Together,
Lost without a trace
Of a friend,
Wishing that our past
Will shed some light
On fallen tears.


Silver Lining
You would see him always smile.
And there were numbers he would dial.
Social and alone,
Such a quiet phone,
But he'd let none of it shine through...

He would bottle it inside.
No one knew what he would hide.
Single all the time,
Single on his mind,
But still nothing he would do...

And in dreams, he would fly...
Silent screams, hide the lies...

He can see the silver lining,
And he takes what's allowed.
But when it comes down to finding,
He just wants the cloud.

All relationships in the past:
Though decent they would never last.
Back to solitude,
He'd never show his mood,
He's an optimist for you...

He admires from afar...
Wanting you safe where you are...

He can see the silver lining,
And he takes what's allowed.
But when it comes down to finding,
He just wants the cloud.

All other things placed aside.
You would have never guessed he's died.
A love torn apart.
Now, a broken heart.
The tears you don't see are true...

And in dreams, now he crawls...
Through the clouds, now he falls...

He can see the silver lining,
And he takes what's allowed.
But when it comes down to finding,
He just wants the cloud.

And he can see the silver lining.

But he just wants the cloud.


So..I was gonna post a few more, but it seems as though I've forgotten how emo some of my earlier work was >.>;;;
Anyway, I'm open to comments and suggestions.

-RS
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Post by savfantasy on Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:59 am

. . . wow. These are so beautiful. I would love to hear what they sound like.
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Post by redserpent on Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:15 pm

=3
Thanks. When I get my new laptop I might record them, but it will require some persuading >.>;;
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Post by Golden Sunset on Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:51 pm

Oh my, those are just wonderfully written. So beautiful. I agree with savfantasy, it would be really nice to hear what they sound like.
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Post by redserpent on Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:09 pm

Well now I'm tempted to post some more of my songs =3

Stumble
The alarm
Rings Loudly.
I pound the snooze and go
Back to sleep.
No hurry,
Life can wait.
All I want to do
Is escape.

I'll run away
To a place
Where I can be free
All day.

I'm running fast,
And won't slow down
Till it comes to pass
That I have found
Someone who's real
And understands
Just how it feels
To fail a chance.

I've fallen,
Hit misery,
Tripped on myself,
Who'll catch me?
The floor tastes
Like concrete,
I've hit my face on
A place for feet.

I'm falling fast,
Pick myself up,
Put my feet
On my face.

I'm running fast,
And won't slow down
Till it comes to pass
That I have found
Someone who's real
And understands
Just how it feels
To fail a chance.

I have fallen
Down and I
Can't pick myself up
This time.

I ran too fast,
Didn't slow down,
It came to pass
That I never found
Someone who's real
And understands
Just how it feels
To fail a chance.

(instrumental)

I never found
Someone who's real
And understands
Just how it feels
To fail a chance.


Tomorrow
Should I even be trying?
Feels like I'm dying,
Running around all day.
I can't tell if I'm stalling,
Feels like I'm falling,
Will you please let me know...

How I'm doing?
Is it worth continuing
Putting my heart and soul
In this?

It's like I'm not even there
I'm just a wisp of air,
Whirling around in wind.
It will all end the same way,
Just like yesterday,
When we both said goodbye.

To each other.
We parted, went out own
Ways and now we are both
Alone.

I don't know if I can take
Much more of this but
I will try for you,
And the memories of yesterday.
How much farther can we go
Until we reach for the stars
And we fall,
Only to get up tomorrow...

Now it's a brand new day,
A time to say,
What can we do better?
I'm running upside-down,
You sky's my ground,
And I am above the clouds.

Am I dreaming?
I feel just like I am
Flying but I can't move
From your side.

I don't know if I can take
Much more of this but
I will try for you,
And the memories of yesterday.
How much farther can we go
Until we reach for the stars
And we fall,
Only to get up tomorrow...

Now I know how it feels
To fly,
Without leaving your side.
I'm glad we never had to
Say,
Good,
Bye...
(whispered)It was more like 'later'

I don't know if I can take
Much more of this but
I will try for you,
And the memories of yesterday.
How much farther can we go
Until we reach for the stars
And we fall,
Only to get up tomorrow...

I don't know if I can take
Much more of this but
I will try for you,
So we can move on tomorrow...


Gosh, I'd forgotten how long these are >.>;;
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Post by Golden Sunset on Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:12 pm

~Claps~ I like those too!!! Don't really know which one I like most, however. "Stumble" is interesting.
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