Dementia: Poems by the Sick and Unwell

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Dementia: Poems by the Sick and Unwell

Post by Excalibur on Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:46 am

As the title suggests, these are poems from a wacky mind, one possibly not containing all its marbles...
Read on, and enjoy. Feel free to comment and spam me.

[General Disclaimer: Excalibur is not in any way responsible for loss of brain cells after viewing this thread. Read at your own risk.]

[This poem is on i had up on Gaia. Err... first poem I wrote in a couple years. So yep. ]
Fragance

Bright Violet in the dim light,
Squinting under a canopy of colors,
I kneel upon the softness of Green.

Looking up past the Pink,
Beyond the dizzy stars and hazy sky,
I see my life pass before my eyes.

Yellow film, White faces,
Laughing, crying, teasing,
Love once had, now gone.

Head down, colorless tears,
Eyes closed, hiding in Darkness,
Where, oh where is the Light?

Rising up with new resolve,
Prickly Brown beneath bright Red,
A bunch for what may come?

Harsh fabric, roughly wiping away,
Twinkling spheres upon the sky,
Missing your sweet aura.

Nothing left, no regrets.
Your fragrance drifting away,
Determined to find another.
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Post by savfantasy on Sat Sep 12, 2009 11:40 am

That's a really pretty poem. I love the use of all the color words. The last stanza I feel is particularly powerful. It left me with a sense of hope. :3
I hope you'll post more, I'd love to read them.
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Post by Excalibur on Sat Sep 12, 2009 11:46 am

Haha, aw danks. I dunt desurve te praise. Me engresh nut so good.
lol, random. But thanks ^^. And haha, yeah I'll generate a few more once I get randomly inspired, or if i get requests. =P
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Post by savfantasy on Sat Sep 12, 2009 11:47 am

Great! I'll keep an eye out for them. Very Happy
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