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Walker Boy's poety

Post by Walker Boy on Thu Aug 06, 2009 4:46 am

Surrending

Absolute purity of multi-dimensional dirt.
Generated into the spheres of solitude and celibacy.
A mind, filled with puzzled thoughts,
floating over the mist of knowledge.
Version of a heavenly hell, directly injected
into the veins of a withering body.
Disastrous, ominous, destructive foe,
attaching the cells of curiosity.
Inevitable voyager, greeting you with disease.
Virginity associated with the greatest sin.
As a child being recognized as the oldest living creature.
Water and a non-swimmer, fire and vast forests.
Combining in the flesh of a soul that is wondering;
Not yet discovered rule of attraction.
Nervously hovering above the missing hope,
and the lack of faith.
Filling all the voids with the kind of nothing, that remains.
Developing into a creature, miserable enough to be gone.
Destroying itself continuously by enduring anomaly of existance.

...Genuine conception about living
through the chaos...
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Re: Walker Boy's poety

Post by Walker Boy on Sat Aug 08, 2009 6:58 am

Only for a dream

Scared, running away from my
destiny chased by the years,
chased by a time of silent sorrow,
knowing nothing but fears,
I'm kissing weakness with
unknown passion I once had lost
and that I once again have found in
my long time feelings of frost.
Through the pain I see small, pale
joy around
when all my strenght is gone and I
fall on the ground.
I used to say I have the others to
help me forget,
but they don't have the strenght.
Sometimes I sit and I think deep in
the night
when reality torments me from
inside,
where do all of my dreams go if
not to me?
Or maybe they're here and I'm too
blinded to see.
Blinded by solitude, my dear old
friend, blinded by her perfect shine,
that buried my everything deep in
the sand of time.
Never let me to take a look behind,
but thrilled me with her spirit so
capture you,
to let you fall from grace, to break
you, even to forgive you..
I sometimes wish so much to smell
your sigh next to mine.
That dream is killing me, that
broken dream, that dream ... So
fine.
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Re: Walker Boy's poety

Post by SeekingSeer on Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:21 pm

The poems have a deep meaning. I like that. However you should probably space out your stanzas. Also if you choose to edit, 'So fine...' Should have a line of its own. Spacing allows for an easier read and easier on the eyes. If you seperate the last line, the effect it gives increases. That's my opinion anyway.
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